Do not consider proofreading help as cheating on your assignment - a good author owns it to their paper to heal it from those tiny typo scars. Even the greatest novelists have their works checked. There is cheap proofreading which I would recommend for you.
Joni, my name is John Fleckenstein, published author, game enthusiasts, from Yale (where I studied the behaviorisms of the digital-age consumers). I think your Godhood is the PERFECT deserving of more attention game, perfect for our magazine, in a genre that is crowded with incomplete experiences. Let me know if you are interested. Best of luck! -J